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Ver. 1
The world moves fast, so bright, so loud,
Yet I walk slow beneath the crowd.
They laugh, they talk, they shine, they glow,
While I sink deep where no one goes.
The sun still rises, warm and bright,
But I am tired of chasing light.
Each step is heavy, words fall thin,
A battle fought but never win.
They do not see, they do not know,
The weight I bear, the ache below.
So I just smile, say, "I'm okay,"
And hope to make it one more day.
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Ver 2.
The world moves fast, so bright, so loud,
Yet I walk slow beneath the crowd.
They laugh, they talk, they shine, they glow,
While I sink deep where no one goes.
The sun still rises, warm and bright,
But I am tired of chasing light.
I can't move further,
But I fear being seen as a burden
They do not see, they do not know,
The weight I bear, the ache below.
So I just smile, say, "I'm okay,"
And hope to make it one more day.
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Had some inspiration for a poem while I was at work today :sparkles: Everyone else seems so.. joyful living their lives. It all seems to come so easy to them. Even just working seems like it doesn't weigh much to them, but to me.. it's incredibly heavy. I get so extremely exhausted, I am paralysed for the rest of the day. While they go out to hang with friends, drink, go to the gym with full energy, I just wondered why I can't relate. That's kinda the inspiration for this poem. Feeling like you're the "odd one out" just because things don't seem to come as easily to you as they do with others.
feel free to let me know which one is your favourite :sparkles:
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Comments (15)
Hi
I promise it's not AI. I'm legit against using AI for creative expressions such as writing and art etc as an artist myself 🫶🏻
I genuinely love your work.. I feel them deep to my core as well. You are really talented bunny, please share more x
Reply to: Rus Verstappen
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I like commenting stuff on ur stuff and profile tho :(
Reply to: Rus Verstappen
Alright then x I can multitask