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Hello! I'm YetAnotherPersona, and this is my fifth entry as part of team #ScrawlingSpades for the Cards and Souls event.
This one is another poem, for the prompt "Retribution." It's from the point of view of Frisk as they fight Photoshop Flowey, and decide to kill him rather than spare his life. I hope you enjoy!
Word count: 519 words
Time taken: 4 hours
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How dare you?
I did everything just right
Solved or fled from every fight
Pacified the Royal Guards
(Some of them were REALLY HARD)
Fought a robot on TV
Glaring lights, all eyes on me
Then at last I faced the King
Spared his life, risked everything
So exhausted, so relieved
For a moment I believed
I might finally get to rest
Then you did what you do best.
Out of nowhere, you.
Let me tell you:
Thinking that at last you’ve won
That the hardest fight is done
That you might just be okay
Then, to have it snatched away...
Seeing all your progress wrecked
Such contempt! Such disrespect!
Nothing can prepare you.
I get you.
I can see the SOULs you stole
But they haven’t made you whole
I can sense the game you crashed
And the SAVE file that you smashed
I can feel your pointless spite
Mingled with your sick delight
How pathetic can you get?
All those human SOULs, and yet
There’s no trace of virtue in you
God, I swear that I could skin you!
I shan’t spare you.
Can you feel it?
Tell me, ugly little flower
Can you sense your fading power?
One by one, the SOULs are turning
My Determination’s burning
Sure, I’m not a natural fighter
But this battle’s getting tighter
Don’t imagine I’ll forget this
I’ll make sure that you regret this
Don’t be fooled; I’m not a hero
Your defence has dropped to zero
Does it scare you?
Now you feel it.
Slash. There went your last HP
Where now is your evil glee?
Seems you’ve ceased your ugly crooning
Good. It’s time you got a pruning.
I must say, your tortured wailing
As you feel your power failing
Strikes me as a pleasant noise
We’ll no longer be your toys
Now you skulk, pathetic, whinging
Your whole aspect has me cringing
God, I just can’t bear you.
Look at you!
Mumbling your half-hearted threats
Haggard, hopeless as it gets
Eyes fixed on my hand; my knife
Daring me to end your life
And guess what? I’ve had enough
I decide to call your bluff
Here, with you, at last I find
I’m quite sick of being kind
This is where I take the plunge
Raise the knife; step forward; lunge
And pare you.
That’s it.
The cut is deadly and direct
But here’s what I did not expect:
Your last words before your death
Spoken in a rasping breath
Through a twisted, shattered grin, you say...
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Oh.
Alright then, you got me. You’ve proven me wrong
It’s only a wonder it took you this long
I wasn’t in danger; I’d already won
So why did I strike? Out of anger? For fun?
I finally ed up the peaceful solution
I made it my job to deal out retribution
So now I’m a killer; the title seems strange
Looks like even the nicest of people can change
This life that I’ve taken, this blood that I’ve spilled
Just proves I’ve accepted: it’s kill or be killed.
You drove me to this.
How dare you?
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If you enjoyed this poem, why not check out my AO3? There you can find other poems and stories I've written.
Comments (50)
That looks very awesome!
Thank you!
Hi
Sup
This is really awesome, I wish this part of the game was acknowledged more! Damn, nice work, this is my favorite poem I've read on here.
Thank you very much!
I think the neutral endings get overlooked at times; Photoshop Flowey is such a fantastic battle.
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The fight was such a surprise, sudden realism instead of a black and white sprite. I freaking loved it.
This is one of the most awesome things I've read. In most poems on this amino its just frisk good chara bad, I finally see something different than that.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reply to: YetAnotherPersona #ScrawlingSpades
I also checked out the link you left to your other stories, and im reallt happy i did, I really feel like those are going to turn into an undertale book someday :)
It's a song?
I suppose it could be, if someone wrote music for it. Currently it's a poem.
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Ho, okay, thanks