Edit: AAAAAAAAAAAAAA THANK YOU SO MUCH!! THISNIS MY FIRST POEM TO BE FEATURED ON UTA! ;w; I'M SO HAPPY HHHHH
Edit 2: AND A BROADCAST? AAAAAAAAAAA I'M SO HECCING HAPPY THANK YOU
Hello, UTA! It's April here, and I'm back with a new post! This one sort of came out of the blue, to be honest. I was messing around on a game with an online friend of mine, and she went afk. Suddenly, as soon as she left the keyboard, I got the urge to write. She ended up being gone for a while, sadly, and I had to depart from the computer, but during the time she was gone, I wrote this poem! Some of my research for it will look a little odd in my search history (*cough* "words that rhyme with bomb" for example *cough*), but I think it paid off. I respect this as one of the best poems I've ever written! In my head, I read the "tick tock" sections as a song, and the rest as a rap, haha. I'm really proud of this one ;w; It's written in the perspective of the monsters in a timeline where, as a spirit, Chara kills monsters ruthlessly, until Frisk falls down. They continue their reign of terror, tempting Frisk to them. I worked hard on this poem, so I hope you enjoy it!
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Poem Information
Time Taken: Approximately 45 minutes
Word Count: 317
Character Count: 1,559
Apps Used: TextEdit(?) for a Mac
Tools Used: Mac desktop, Apple Wireless keyboard, Apple wireless mouse, my brain, my imagination, my h a n d s
:warning: THIS POEM INCLUDES DARK THEMES! IF YOU ARE SENSITIVE TO THE ALLUSION TO DEATH, THIS POEM IS NOT FOR YOU! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED! :warning:
As you read this, keep in mind that lines seperated by a "-" should be read with a deep breath between the two.
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Tick Tock
Tick, tock
Tick, tock.
Listen to the clock
Tick, tock.
Tick, Tock
When will you stop?
Tick, tock
Tick, tock…
Tick, tock
Tick, tock…
…
Your heart changes
With the flip of a dime.
One minute you’re a savage,
The next, you’re kind!
You never seem to listen;
At this rate, your soul will be mine!
I’ve watched from afar.
With every step
I raise the bar.
Now be smart,
You can even restart;
But only once.
You don’t have much time!
I tell myself,
In my mind,
That it will be fine;
But it’s only a matter of time
Before you strike,
Before you take us in your wake of crime.
Before you decide,
That we don’t matter.
But that's only in YOUR eyes.
You’re like a time bomb,
Ticking,
Waiting,
Threatening to destroy our calm.
…
Tick tock
Tick tock
Listen to the clock
Tick tock
Tick Tock
We will be on top.
Tick tock
Tick tock…
Tick tock
Tick tock…
…
So, now there’s another?
We’re begging you,
Please stop!
Think of the mothers,
The sisters,
The brothers,
The fathers.
You watch over the new one,
Stating your souls are brighter than the sun;
Saying your kind,
Your souls are alike,
But we all know that’s a lie.
You lure us with traps,
Feeding us crap
About how righteous you are,
Or how you will go far
To protect us;
To save us.
You should just shut your trap…
You’re digging your own grave.
We will become brave!
Our flames with continue to burn,
For we have learned.
We have learned from our past mistakes.
We know, now, what makes you ache.
We will not allow you to create
A fate
Of that which we cannot escape.
We will decide our own fate.
Just you wait…
Tick tock
Tick tock
Listen to the clock
Tick tock
Tick tock…-
We will make your heart…
Stop.
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Proof



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Credits
The art for the TPL can be found here.
The initial TPL was made by me.
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Comments (101)
So cool
Thank you! OwO
Good job with the rhythm and the word choice! It was eerie and hypnotic in a way, and that only made the abrupt ending more impactful. Keep up the good work, and this was a feature well deserved.
:OOO Thank you! I really appreciate that! I'll try to keep it up lol
This is very nice! The words flow so well
Thank you! I tried really hard on it lmao
Amazing!
Hnngg Thank you!
Reply to: aprilkitty #WSMember
Ur welcome!