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:alarm_clock: Tick Tock :alarm_clock:

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Edit: AAAAAAAAAAAAAA THANK YOU SO MUCH!! THISNIS MY FIRST POEM TO BE FEATURED ON UTA! ;w; I'M SO HAPPY HHHHH

Edit 2: AND A BROADCAST? AAAAAAAAAAA I'M SO HECCING HAPPY THANK YOU

Hello, UTA! It's April here, and I'm back with a new post! This one sort of came out of the blue, to be honest. I was messing around on a game with an online friend of mine, and she went afk. Suddenly, as soon as she left the keyboard, I got the urge to write. She ended up being gone for a while, sadly, and I had to depart from the computer, but during the time she was gone, I wrote this poem! Some of my research for it will look a little odd in my search history (*cough* "words that rhyme with bomb" for example *cough*), but I think it paid off. I respect this as one of the best poems I've ever written! In my head, I read the "tick tock" sections as a song, and the rest as a rap, haha. I'm really proud of this one ;w; It's written in the perspective of the monsters in a timeline where, as a spirit, Chara kills monsters ruthlessly, until Frisk falls down. They continue their reign of terror, tempting Frisk to them. I worked hard on this poem, so I hope you enjoy it!

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Poem Information

Time Taken: Approximately 45 minutes

Word Count: 317

Character Count: 1,559

Apps Used: TextEdit(?) for a Mac

Tools Used: Mac desktop, Apple Wireless keyboard, Apple wireless mouse, my brain, my imagination, my h a n d s

:warning: THIS POEM INCLUDES DARK THEMES! IF YOU ARE SENSITIVE TO THE ALLUSION TO DEATH, THIS POEM IS NOT FOR YOU! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED! :warning:

As you read this, keep in mind that lines seperated by a "-" should be read with a deep breath between the two.

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Tick Tock

Tick, tock

Tick, tock.

Listen to the clock

Tick, tock.

Tick, Tock

When will you stop?

Tick, tock

Tick, tock…

Tick, tock

Tick, tock…

Your heart changes

With the flip of a dime.

One minute you’re a savage,

The next, you’re kind!

You never seem to listen;

At this rate, your soul will be mine!

I’ve watched from afar.

With every step

I raise the bar.

Now be smart,

You can even restart;

But only once.

You don’t have much time!

I tell myself,

In my mind,

That it will be fine;

But it’s only a matter of time

Before you strike,

Before you take us in your wake of crime.

Before you decide,

That we don’t matter.

But that's only in YOUR eyes.

You’re like a time bomb,

Ticking,

Waiting,

Threatening to destroy our calm.

Tick tock

Tick tock

Listen to the clock

Tick tock

Tick Tock

We will be on top.

Tick tock

Tick tock…

Tick tock

Tick tock…

So, now there’s another?

We’re begging you,

Please stop!

Think of the mothers,

The sisters,

The brothers,

The fathers.

You watch over the new one,

Stating your souls are brighter than the sun;

Saying your kind,

Your souls are alike,

But we all know that’s a lie.

You lure us with traps,

Feeding us crap

About how righteous you are,

Or how you will go far

To protect us;

To save us.

You should just shut your trap…

You’re digging your own grave.

We will become brave!

Our flames with continue to burn,

For we have learned.

We have learned from our past mistakes.

We know, now, what makes you ache.

We will not allow you to create

A fate

Of that which we cannot escape.

We will decide our own fate.

Just you wait…

Tick tock

Tick tock

Listen to the clock

Tick tock

Tick tock…-

We will make your heart…

Stop.

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Credits

The art for the TPL can be found here.

The initial TPL was made by me.

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⏰ Tick Tock ⏰-Edit: AAAAAAAAAAAAAA THANK YOU SO MUCH!! THISNIS MY FIRST POEM TO BE FEATURED ON UTA! ;w; I'M SO HAPPY HHHHH

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